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fer-esh by ~grafick:icongrafick:

Categories Digital Art > Vector > Abstract

©2006-2009 ~grafick
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i am a fan of graffiti but evry1 else who has submitted to the contest has gone graff- i think thers more to a street scene.
it was really hard finding sumthin else i could do, so i came up with this.
urban/street scenes- pollution cough. hows that fresh? im not sure if it gets the urban feel?! well tell me wot u think.
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~oldoneeye Jul 4, 2006, 4:55:52 AM
looks great, i like the dull/pastel colours, though i'm not 100% sure about the grafiti in the top left, dosent seem to mesh so well, since its more bold than everything else.

Also all the rough grainy eldges and specks make it look more urban, even though it uses softer pastels. The colours work great together.

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~andycouncil Jul 4, 2006, 6:10:26 AM
I like the piece, but agree with the comment above about the graff style writing in the top left. I appreciate that it is an urban contest, but it looks too top heavy. I would sit some solid writing towards the bottom of the piece, along with the faint bit - get the feeling of air/pollution rising. Having said that I can appreciate how that would mess with things, like the white drip effect you have coming from the writing - you couldn't really get that if it was at the bottom.

I like the rest of the piece all in all and feel that it has a modern urban design feel to it anyhow.
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=algare Jul 4, 2006, 7:07:51 AM
fresh...very nice..
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~digimonsterz Jul 4, 2006, 7:34:57 AM
it is pretty good, but theres no real focus and nothign is really strong. As it is pretty, the kind of genre youre in will produce some pretty strong stuff. I thinky ou should try again, cuz I knwo youre good at making powerful stuff

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~andycouncil Jul 4, 2006, 9:49:06 AM
Yeah the top left. Could change it, perhaps make it faint like the on you have at the bottom, or as you said move it to the bottom. Lookin good though!
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